tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19159633.post70977648650860717..comments2023-07-05T04:47:25.476-07:00Comments on Sunshine today: Staccato loveindrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01252000077815151315noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19159633.post-86577496819351568472008-07-17T06:16:00.000-07:002008-07-17T06:16:00.000-07:00Ah the first kind words about this post :) man, i'...Ah the first kind words about this post :) man, i've been getting a fair bit of flak for this one<BR/><BR/>"pyar-vyar, eh? shaadi karni hai?"<BR/><BR/>"see, the style is nice, but that story.."<BR/><BR/>etc.<BR/><BR/>*my own commentary*<BR/>And i have to admit, when i re-read the dang thing, I realise that when i wrote it, the only thing staccato about it was the writing style (and that too, only barely), not any of what unfolds.<BR/><BR/>Plus, and i might be over-analyzing here, i think i tried too hard, and that shows. The language got fancy at points, and the story just that much more trite.<BR/><BR/>Ok, tomorrow's another day.indrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252000077815151315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19159633.post-78875763893055722982008-07-16T21:18:00.000-07:002008-07-16T21:18:00.000-07:00wah indy wah! teri kahani mein romance hai, drama ...wah indy wah! teri kahani mein romance hai, drama hai, tragedy hai..woh kya kehte hain..haan thoda pyaar thoda magic..lol..jokes apart, great post..lovely hai ji..and i now have more stuff to read at work..keep writing! manishAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com